Optimize in 10™ - the Free SaaS Onboarding Email Audit
Improve your low-performing emails in minutes. 24-hour turnaround.
Do you keep sending onboarding emails but your users still don’t click to your app?
Let me show you how to improve your emails for more opens and click-throughs with the Onboarding Optimizer™ Method.
Still working on your emails, but they’re not converting? Here’s why↓
Your onboarding emails should wow your users from the start and convert them at the end. You already have a great product, but for some reason, your users don’t even stay long enough to complete the onboarding.
You’ve tried Googling the best onboarding emails for inspiration and asking ChatGPT to rewrite your emails, but you’re still unsure of what to optimize for better engagement and conversions.
Here's the problem:
You're showing users your product, but they still don't understand how it solves their pressing problem — or fits in their routines.
Instead of leading your users to the AHA, your emails are pushing them away:
- Unclear subject lines that confuse the user
- Fluffy hooks that don’t get straight to the point instead of grabbing their attention
- Body copy that feature-bombs instead of showing how your SaaS fixes their problems and fits into their lives
- Vague CTAs that aren’t clear about what your users should do next
INTRODUCING OPTIMIZE IN 10™
Spend $0. Improve your emails for conversions in less time than a coffee break.
You’re one click away from the free audit that shows you how to make your first two emails perform like they should:
- Resonate with your users so they make you their go-to choice
- Retain more satisfied users because they finally understand the value of your product/app
- Secure more paid trials & subscriptions with persuasive emails that get freemium users off the fence
SUGGESTIONS YOU CAN APPLY IN MINUTES
Follow my 3-step process for persuasive, clearer copy that nurtures more users to the AHA
You’ll get step-by-step guidance and suggestions based on my Onboarding Optimizer Method™ to get you faster results in as little time possible.
Here’s how I’ll audit each email from start to finish:
Quick Wins: Find the mistakes hurting your open rates and clicks.
See why your subject lines are getting ignored, if your CTAs are confusing or buried, and if your emails speak to your users’ desires.
Foundational Fixes: Fix your timing, segmentation, and messaging so users stop dropping off halfway.
I’ll show you where your sequence confuses, repeats, or sends the wrong message to the wrong users — and how to fix it so users start converting and stop dropping off.
The Performance Power-Up: See which emails actually drive signups, upgrades, and user activation — and delete the rest.
I’ll show you what needs to be triggered, tested, or rewritten — so your emails drive signups and upgrades instead of getting ignored.
How it works
Catch up with pending tasks in the next 48 hours while I work on your first two emails.
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Fill out the form and share your first two emails in a Google Doc.
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Sit back while I audit your emails. Then, get your audit in your inbox 48 hours later.
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Implement your suggestions in minutes and wait to see the results.
Fill out the form
Get your free audit in 24 hours.
Hey there
! Let’s get you the results you deserve.
I’m Mira, the Copyhackers-certified email conversion copywriter you go to when you need to activate more users.
You’ll work with a SaaS-oriented copywriter who analyzes your email journey, product, and target audience, coupled with conversion copywriting frameworks to drive maximum ROI for your SaaS.
Change It 'Til You Make It Guarantee
Seeing results can take a while. If you don’t see an increase within 30 days of implementing your suggestions, I’ll work with you to make your emails convert.
Please wait at least 14 days to start seeing results. Got more Q’s?
No SaaS is the same, so I can’t give specific numbers. However, after you implement all the suggestions, you can see anything from:
- Higher open rates
- Higher click rates
- Higher user retention across your email journeys
Your results need time to show up! I advise that you leave the changes for at least 14 days before measuring your results.
It’s easier to share with you and I won’t need to login to your email platform
No, this offer only includes two emails.
We’ll start with your first two emails to improve your chances of retaining customers till the end of the sequence. The longer they stay, the more confident they’ll feel about converting.
If you’re looking for a full email journey instead, click here for more details on the 4 Days To Better Emails Audit. Or if you’d prefer a new email journey, click here to get on a call.
No more email headaches!
In 24 hours, you'll get detailed insights how to fix your emails' biggest issues and increase your conversions.
Get more users to the AHA and convert more users in minutes with my Onboarding Optimizer™ Method.